Tuesday, May 19, 2009

secret life of bees

Honey House


Hot flamingo shade of the house
Very sweet smell in the honey house
Lily's soles of her shoes stuck as she walked
The spinner worked like a cotton candy machine
Sprays of rain flew over their faces , didn't wipe it away it made the
world fill so alive to them.

The author describes everything in bigger words. She also defines words.
I think that she did a great job on the settings. I wouldnt have been able to write it so descripted.

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