Honey House
Hot flamingo shade of the house
Very sweet smell in the honey house
Lily's soles of her shoes stuck as she walked
The spinner worked like a cotton candy machine
Sprays of rain flew over their faces , didn't wipe it away it made the
world fill so alive to them.
The author describes everything in bigger words. She also defines words.
I think that she did a great job on the settings. I wouldnt have been able to write it so descripted.
Tuesday, May 19, 2009
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